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Once more, this is part two. Please enjoy!
The fact that Daniel is really into Kayle even though she isn´t sure about their relationship shows that type of guy that Daniel is: a caring and sweet guy (at least from my perspective). All the scenes that happened in this part were written smoothly and I enjoyed reading them. I also liked the fact that you put real emotions and doubts about relationships (showed in Kayle's character) because many people are unsure about it and it's something that happens in real life.
Perhaps you could go a bit deeper about what Daniel likes in Kayle since he's asking her to be his girlfriend. Maybe he could say that to her? Beyond that, I think everything's really good.
This was so cute! You have definitely talent for this, keep writing!