Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

United States

HI, IM BACK AND I LOVE YOU ALL! <3
14 | she/her | Christian
Forgot my personality type but it's...uh, nvm I totally forgot
Can't think of anything else that's important
Loves...reading? Writing? That's kind of a given on the website

Message from Writer

All of you ROCK! Thanks for being here! XD
P.S. The captions for the cat is "Everything is going according to plan."
This cat is my spirit animal! <3
QUESTION (VERY IMPORTANT):
So I'm writing a book separately and I'm wondering if anyone would care to read it and give me some feedback? Please let me know!
Also, I didn't finish some of my series last time so...anybody care? No? *crawls into a hole and dies*
_____
Just kidding, but even if you just wanna drop in and say hi, go ahead! We're shooting to break the record for how many comments we can have on a piece.

Jeez, there are not enough words to express how glad I am to be back on this site and with all of you! Did ya know ya rock? Well you do! XD Have a fantastic LOVELY day!

Under Mine

September 30, 2020

FREE WRITING

16
Tears run down my face
Pooling at my feet 
Sobs echo through the room
Only heard by me
“Don’t cry,” they say,
“It makes you weak
and small; be strong.”
So I suck in the tears
Put on my mask
Walk on and pretend
that nothing is wrong
My heart cracks
In my chest
But nobody knows 
I want to scream
To yell
To cry

But keeping them in
Is worse than letting
Them out
At least, when I cry
I’m still me
When I pretend
I’m fine
I disappear
Day by day
I’m the only one
Who sees my
Cracked reflection
’Cause everyone else is
Too busy adjusting their
Own masks to see
Under Mine

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18 Comments
  • Busssy.Beee

    Re: That's good to know. Wishing you the best of luck for all your school work! Don't worry about "8 More People To Go," I'll wait for you! <3<3<3


    5 months ago
  • Busssy.Beee

    Oh, my shattered heart. I love this so much! Also, how are you? You haven't been here recently, so I hope you're okay!


    5 months ago
  • midnight.summerrose

    Why are you so good?? I need to steal your talent!! :) Every piece I read is amazing!!


    5 months ago
  • beth r.

    well this broke my heart in the best way possible
    re: BE MY PRESIDENT! please?


    5 months ago
  • Chloe :) <3

    This piece is truly amazing like you and all of your pieces. Published another piece, if you want feel free to give it a read?


    5 months ago
  • Bhavya's Treasure

    I LOVED IT!
    Just reviewed. :)


    5 months ago
  • FantasyOtter12

    YAy you republished!! :)


    6 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    I love this so incredibly much, amazing writing! (and I will do a third part of A Descendent soon-tomorrow or the weekend) Stay safe out there!


    6 months ago
  • ~Zoe N~

    I'm reviewing this right now, hopefully it gets to you soon!


    6 months ago
  • lindsmariebuck

    Wow! This is such a great poem. I know how that feels and it sucks. I'm sorry.


    10 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    You know what is the most powerful part of this whole poem"to busy adjusting their own masks to see under mine" thats my favourite part.So beautiful and relatable but also so heartbreaking.One of my favourite lines I've read in a poem<3


    10 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    Love love love


    10 months ago
  • Madelyn (Carolina Girl)

    This is amazing! And so relatable. It feels like in today's world we have to act like we are okay when we feel like sobbing. More people need to care about others.


    10 months ago
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    Ok, sounds good!


    12 months ago
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    You SO need to publish and print it! It would be a bestseller.


    12 months ago
  • V-Rose

    I'm actually past 200 on The King's Cause.


    about 1 year ago
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    ok, thanks.


    about 1 year ago
  • V-Rose

    Whoa! I really agree with this. People are always too busy worrying about themselves to think about others. Your demand-- I mean request has been granted.


    about 1 year ago