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"My screams echo and bounce off the concrete walls only to make a full circuit back to my lonely ears. ", Is my favorite line. its such an extraordinary, out of the blue line, I've never read t before and it stuck to me!
in much contrast, after reading this poem, I was left with a mixed pickle of emotions. the protagonist has gone on to blame the mother for may thins not working out in his/her life, which is completely understandable but after reading the bit I went back and thought about all the times, I myself have been in a similar situation and it made me feel rather guilty.
What did the mother exactly do? such wrong that it brought such deep anger out of the child?
I think this poem is very to the point, quick and keeps the reader on his toes! It is great liberation of building anger, wonderfully expressed!