Jothsimar

Australia

I am a 13 year old girl who loves reading books. I have quite a few hobbies such as science, I love ice skating and I am a big fan on sports too. My friends tell me I am quite a personality.

Message to Readers

Hey Guys, I hope you found this helpful!

Who wants a Peer Review!!

April 1, 2020

FREE WRITING

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Hi guys, 
Just a reminder that I would like to do some peer review to anyone who needs or wants it. Just leave a comment below on what piece that you want me to review and the link to it and I will get in done within 2 days!! I know that reviews are really useful to some people. If you want specific reviews just let me know in your comments!!
If you find this helpful, please like and I would love a few more followers!!!
Thanks!!

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6 Comments
  • Deleted User

    Hi Jothsimar! I was wondering if you're still offering peer reviews? I've got a new piece that I'd like to get somebody's opinion on, if you have the time that is. Thanks a lot, and I'll definitely follow you! Here she is:
    HEADLINES FROM HISTORY | Part one: The Colosseum
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/160176/version/313241

    Thanks again! Have a great day!


    10 months ago
  • Pavithra C.P

    hi could you please review this piece-
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/156064/version/305732
    Thanks a lot!!!!


    11 months ago
  • Fabiana250

    Hi, I would love if you could review two of my pieces. "The Cave of Fears" and "The life they left us"
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/154825/version/302388
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/152924/version/298735
    Or my poem "Missing you?
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/153633/version/300174
    Thank you!!


    11 months ago
  • HelpMe512

    Can you review this please:
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/154045/version/301004
    it's a chapter in my novel. Maybe read the other chapters for context but not needed


    11 months ago
  • deep_breaths

    Go ahead and review and of my STORIES, just not my #120words crap. I don't care what piece.


    11 months ago
  • julia.vasyakin

    I don't really care what piece, whichever you think is best and if you do thank you! I still don't understand this entire website thing but getting used to it!


    11 months ago