19 and boppin
out of the deck of lgbt cards, im the ace
im dippin in like one week y'all should know where to find me by now
Written By: aryelee
February 20, 2020
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This was so beautiful ;~; but also I made it just in time to say goodbye :((
"rebirth is slow and painful but you move forward because / moving back / means burying yourself a second time."
favorite lines. but ah god, this is gorgeous. the way you wrap up a whole story in a minimal amount of lines in a poetic way is pure magic.
"there's something viscous and bloodthirsty in your veins. / you howl in a fight, carrying that storm in you bones."
the strength in these lines gave me chills. one thing though, did you mean "your" instead of "you" at the end of that line, right before "bones"?
also applause for your structure of this piece. it flows and goes in a whole new level with you doing this. in a sense, it's kind of aesthetically pleasing. all in all, lesbian pirates are a definite new love of mine---lovely work.
this reminded me of another piece i read a LONG time ago. it was about gay pirates but in a different way. anyway, here's the link if you wanna check it out.
ahh the reminder you're leaving!! way to break someone's heart twice within a single piece. first the story, then the fact you're leaving. i cannot with you aryelee! you simply have too much power
This is so good sjbsbdb
lesbian pirates!? hell fucking yea!
this gave me such delightful chills, i absolutely love it
I love this! the last few lines are especially amazing
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