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skeletons

By: she’s-got-a-story


FREE WRITING


last year i went with my sister to the museum of natural history.
as we looked up at the dinosaurs, i took her hand and wondered 
if any of them starved to death.


Peer Review

I like how much story is compressed into just these two sentences. Impactful in a way that really makes you think. I also love the line breaks as they provide unique emphasis, drawing the reader to the last line flawlessly :)


Why dinosaur skeletons? And what inspired you to write this piece? These are rather meaningless questions, so it's totally fine if you don't want to answer them. I was just being randomly curious.


Reviewer Comments

Great job!! This is such a short piece, but I love how it seems to challenge the reader with a silent question.
Keep writing <3