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I like how much story is compressed into just these two sentences. Impactful in a way that really makes you think. I also love the line breaks as they provide unique emphasis, drawing the reader to the last line flawlessly :)
Why dinosaur skeletons? And what inspired you to write this piece? These are rather meaningless questions, so it's totally fine if you don't want to answer them. I was just being randomly curious.
Great job!! This is such a short piece, but I love how it seems to challenge the reader with a silent question.
Keep writing <3