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Message to Readers
dedicated to a friend
tell me what you think!
i know it's been quite a while, but i'm still kicking loves :)
The way 'scraping' is writen is amazing it shows the emphasis and contotation on the word. This piece to me is an intervention for a friend who maybe has their own problems and takes them out on you because you're the only one there for them. This is written while you're stewing, you-don't-mean -it -but- you- do kind of thing.
Is the 'dead' thing, your relationship with this person or maybe your respect.
Nice piece and formatting, here, thanks for sharing.