19 and boppin
out of the deck of lgbt cards, im the ace
im dippin in like one week y'all should know where to find me by now
Written By: aryelee
February 8, 2020
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my first thought when i saw this was, "hooray she's back!!" quickly followed by, "oh no this is going to rip my heart out isn't it." your formatting and diction is unmatched; somehow you manage to evoke a type of melancholy that comes only from knowing in a world where everyone else is clueless. this endless suffering is awful yet poignant; i hate you and i love you for it. and the continual motif of broken glass? inspired. this leaves something slick and heavy in my chest and "have we met?" will keep echoing in my head for the rest of the day. thanks for this. truly.
This is very good writing! The theme reminds me of the movie Groundhog Day. It’s a great movie, you should watch it! :) Anyway, I love the writing style and the way you formatted it really adds to it! This is an amazing piece!
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