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The line, "With her squeaking rubber duck army.", drew me in, it's not really a phrase used a lot.
What are some specific things she has done that make her yellow?
This was extremely cute and wholesome, a nice little break from all the angst on here, I write angst on here too and love reading it as much as I write it, but sheeesh sometimes, you know?