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I have little experience with writing poetry. Even so, I attempted something different with this one. Please let me know of your thoughts and if there are any ways you think the piece may be improved. Thank you for taking the time to read my work.
Quite charming and very relatable, piece. Nice perspective and tone. The only thing I might change would be the rhyming pattern. To flow more smoothly, maybe consider changing the pattern from ABABCCDED to ABABCDCDE, although it does still flow how it is. Probably a matter of opinion. Great job.