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I love the title, I remembered it from when it was first published, good job on that.
I'd like some girlhood details mentioned in the footnotes.
You're obviously well read and descriptive writer but some focus before the wedding would really put it over the top. Your Bio kind of scared me, I don't know if this review is worth your wild or what but I tried, and I really like your piece, so thank you for sharing and keep writing!