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Message to Readers
this piece is based on imagination, and the unexplored plains of your mind. It's a whole other world, a glorious one. I hope you like it- please review! I would really appreciate it. Comments and likes always helps too.
I really like this because it shows really how much we can achieve with our imaginations. Your description is awesome, and it feels like I'm there in this place. Awesome job!
I really would like to know if this is what you imagine yourself to be, or what you want yourself to be. Either way, I really like it.