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It's a very touching story. It's not a common experience, but you do a very good job of conveying just why it happened the way it did. Through the whole second paragraph we know you're going to get emotionally scarred, but there's tension that keeps us interested as we wonder exactly how this situation will produce emotional trauma.
The experience of coming to a new school and trying to make friends. The effects of moving around so much. The type and strength of your friendship with "the mysterious boy."
This is a touching and sad story. And the reflection is also well-structured: you go from broad reflection, to background information, to the specifics of how the scar was formed. There are some small things to pay attention to: tense things, comma/semicolon usage, selection of detail. But overall I applaud not only the manner in which you've expressed this story, but also your bravery in doing so. And please, never give up... scars heal, people change and mature, and things tend to turn out well in the end!