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I think we all have that feeling that none of us are truly "home." Some people may think 'home' is an otherworldly place, while some just may not know and/or experienced what a home is.
I think you can engage a little more into why you don't know where home is, or where you think you might find "home."
Hi there, welcome to WtW. I enjoyed this piece, so well done! Always keep writing.