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The entire piece was absolute gold! The use of description is astounding, and I love how you show human imperfection throughout this piece, and I love the lines, "...fell for imperfection yet again....and you." I love how these lines show that we all tend to make mistakes for mere desires.
This piece is a true masterpiece, nothing needs to be changed.!
Well done! Absolutely amazing! Always keep writing!