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lowercase intentional because I’m lazy and it looks nice xx
i love it. i love love love it. i adore the absolute starvation that i felt reading this piece. i understood it and the only thought in my mind was "i am absolutely floored because I AM THAT, TOO". it's so interesting how you manage to portray both revolt and desire for the boys you write about.
i'd love to know if this was geared to be an 'i want to fix them' or an 'i want them to want me' type of thing. i felt both, and both are brilliant and effective and your language pulls the poem in both directions, so i'd love to hear what you initially intended with this!
you're so talented. i love what you did with this piece!! :)