Wicked!

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Daydreaming and procrastinating more than is healthy.

Writer's block and sleep deprivation are my constant companions.

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For Aurelia.Valus and BurningMidnightOil's #apoemaday contest; republishing for long live evil's competition.

Feedback would be greatly appreciated.

parched | #apoemaday14

April 22, 2020

FREE WRITING

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i asked for 
the truth, 
thinking that it'd 
be like water 
to my parched heart.
 
but darling, 
i never knew 
that you were harbouring 
a devastating flood.
 
Finished: 14.01.20, 10:37 pm IST

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11 Comments
  • Jasmine khawar

    It shook my insides, so gorgeous


    5 days ago
  • purple galaxy

    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/161066/version/315111
    plz, read this it is for the comp. I am sending it to all the other people who entered


    about 1 month ago
  • WhispersOfGray

    Wow. Wow. So gorgeously written. I can feel the emotion... yes, sometimes, the truth isn't what we want to hear and it hurts. This piece is simply beautiful.


    about 1 month ago
  • elliemccul

    This is so gorgeous, and there's some amazing imagery here. It leaves the reader with a sharp, vivid image.


    about 1 month ago
  • purple galaxy

    comp results 24th April


    about 1 month ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    I love the twist at the end


    5 months ago
  • Wicked!

    @baker and @babybluelamentations thank you so much!

    @Raquel god, you made my day. Thank you!


    5 months ago
  • Loser

    The comparison of truth to water is a truly perceptive concept. Despite this poem's shortness, it speaks such truth. I would say that this deserves to be published for the entire world to see (as in published in a book of poetry).


    5 months ago
  • babybluelamentations

    Yes. A lovely truth about telling the truth; this is perfect, and so applicable to many things. I’m really loving the short poem style you have going; the format really adds to the short and sweet aspect of your pieces. Beautiful work <3


    5 months ago
  • baker

    p.s you are an amazing poet, keep up the hard work and don't let no one tell you you cant


    5 months ago
  • baker

    this was an amazing piece. this is the truth. sometimes we think we want to know the truth but when we know, it hurts more than anything


    5 months ago