18 | she/they | hypothetical astronaut | ekphrastic poet | haunted house
the person who this is about will never know this about them
Written By: Norah
January 20, 2020
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Favorite lines: "something intentional and messy / like that,"
So abstract and vague, I like everything about this piece!! Your title grabbed my attention, I couldn't not read your piece. The point of the long titles is to display emotion and catch a reader's eye and just add more to the actual piece---and yours did just that. Amazing. Also, your ending...*slow clap* The way you add a character in there and give him so much emotion and importance in two sentences is outstanding. Plus on top of everything, your structure of this piece was remarkable! Splendid!
One thing though, if they're "face down in the dewy grass"---where are you?
thank you babybluelamentations, this is high praise from someone who's also a fantastic poet!
I don’t understand how you write so perfectly. You never cease to amaze me with your freshness in concept, matter, and vocabulary, and I can’t give enough praise to your pieces.
“it’s like this: the blurry white moon at four o’clock” is such a pretty line, and i’m obsessed with the slightly obscure metaphors you use—they are downright gorgeous. Amazing work, you’re a genius of a poet <3
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