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Message to Readers
Your shine won't last forever
But you'll forever glow
It truly is an inspiring, wonderful wish! It perfectly translates the sense of hopefulness that emanates from your piece, it is bright and shining, like the stars.
I would like to see the starry sky fade into a gorgeous sunset, and experience alongside the narrator what it feels like, after such a sweet wish, to step into a new decade filled with hope.
I love the almost conversational tone of the piece, it has a pleasant flow that made me smile while reading it. The text feels alive, multi-dimensional, and each new sentence is a breath of fresh air. It's perfect!