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Written By: loveletterstosappho
February 2, 2020
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agh your vocabulary is beautiful. it sets the scene so much better than the basic synonyms (i mean seriously, "filched" "stupor"... that's SAT level right there.). and i honestly just love this piece; you took a whole concept within greek mythology and condensed it into four lines without taking away from the story. this is perfect, i tip my hat to you
My brother has started reading the Percy Jackson series and I have to study so naturally I'm reading it too. I never fully appreciated the eloquence of the piece without understanding the meaning behind it, but I really adore this piece now and can't stop reading it
In four short lines you vividly capture a betrayal. I also love the setting of Greek Mythology.
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So, so gorgeous. You definitely nailed the compressed editing; this is so short, yet tells so much within its obviously carefully chosen words. I love it so much <3
i had to do an an entire project on io and it's so unnecessarily grisly
like hera calm down. none of greek mythology would've happened if zeus could've kept it to himself
Short yet punching hard. Great work as always! Even if this comment came a bit early
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