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The most delightful part was the sudden turn of events, when the decorations turned into a swarm of flying monster baubles. That was incredible!
The only part I'd really like more depth on is what happened "last Christmas." Why were their parents upset? What was the "small disagreement?"
You're a very good story-teller! Well done!