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Do you see actual things or is it all metaphorical?
Do you Iike looking at nothing or at dark? Believe it or not there is a difference, in dark you can make out shadows and forms based on the lighting and how well you know that room, nothing is, well nothing. If placed in a white room would you be entertained, watching your demons fly by or be bored out of your mind?