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I don't usually review stories, only prose and poetry due to length but, "The first thing Madelyn’s mother said when she saw her baby daughter was, “she looks so ordinary.”', drew me right in.
Is Madelyn currently in her 3rd year of 5th grade?
Nice piece, I admire third person writing because I can't do it without being boring. you can and it's great :)