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Message to Readers
This is the first verse of a song I'm writing!
Any feedback you guys have is great (and necessary)!
Please like, follow, and review this piece if you enjoyed this!
The title's eye catching so I started reading, 'Hold her slow.', kept me reading I like the phraseing.
I don't have any, it's good, very descriptive and concise nice work, pfp, and user :)
Nice piece, I like it and agree with it, very nice.