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Say, what is "time"?

Is it the present of existence? But then it would make the past a reminiscence and the future non-existent.

Message to Readers

Only the first stanza is the best one in my opinion. I would looooooove feedback for anything to continue onward from it.

God just left

December 16, 2019


If you’re looking for God,
He just left
Our hopes, 
and prayers won’t be answered

Without a God
To guide us
We are

Abandoned by our sole creator
We seek to sanctify the mistakes
Of this world
And ourselves

Us born of the lost and wandering
Alas the imperfect of ourselves
Relinquishing the holy sins

God can’t save you,
We can’t be saved

The diminishing light fades
A new tomorrow opens
The final tomorrow of us
An old draft that I don't know what to do with.


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