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Message to Readers
Read again starting from the bottom :)
At first, I didn't understand how your piece was in reverse chronology. Instead, I thought your piece brought such a sad, unmotivating message. Then I saw your little comment to read it in reverse. I LOVED IT SO MUCH! It takes effort to write a poem that works well reversed and the normal way. Believe me, I tried. This piece is so good, and I can see the hard work you put into this. Good job.
There was only one place in the poem I felt confused. It's the second line. Before I had seen the message to read it in reverse, that line didn't make sense to me. I thought, "Don't you mean to say 'otherwise' not 'that.'" I believe 'otherwise' would work better reading it the normal way. However, it doesn't work as good reading it reverse. I suggest removing that line completely to avoid confusion.
This piece oozes effort. I always love to see pieces that people tried their hardest on. Great job! Thank you for writing this amazing piece! :)
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Keep on writing!