on that googoogaga type beat
Written By: paigepaigepaige
December 11, 2019
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ok you're honestly incredible. no words to articulate how your poetry makes me feel, so let me praise you by being a hype-woman instead. (hope this gets you the recognition you deserve.)
yes! Lovely. I adore the intimacy of this piece, it makes me think of heavy kisses, sweat and rain for some reason, and i love it. The use of metaphors is flawless, and your diction is amazing. Keep writing! <3
this is simply beautiful. i've never seen poetry like this before, but the rhythm you spun here was amazingly well done. a brilliant way to convey such a beautiful story :)
This piece is absolutely stunning in more ways than one. The imagery and rhythm is beautiful as are the sensory details you imbued in the piece. The story you tell is one that is a compilation of music and loss, spinning us and immersing us in a tale we cannot forget. Well done! Keep up the excellent work:)
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