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This is what it means to me.
I just adore your wording and imagery. "subtle, gradual shift..." That line caught my eye in my feed and I couldn't stop myself from clicking on it. It is absolutely gorgeous and even then that word doesn't seem to convey the beauty of your piece.
Just as you said, "new beginnings". Such a lovely and positive way to look at something such as the year coming to a close.
No there honestly is not a single word I'd change or sentence I'd edit. It is so insanely close to perfect.
Love it. :)
You have got such a God given talent lovely. Please don't ever stop writing this is absolutely beautiful. <3
My favorite line is "My mother always says I spend too much time with myself" That line just stands out to me and I'm sure it's because I connect to it so greatly. But I absolutely love it. Wonderful work! :)