Peer Review by L3X∅L∅TL (United States)

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We were beautiful.

By: tragicbirthday


FREE WRITING

We were beautiful,
Beautiful, broken children
We fell to earth as the sky rejoiced

They despised us,
How we'd dance among the living,
Know, for just a moment,
How it felt to love

You were fire, and I darkness
We matched
Like the dying of stars
Beauty and destruction
We couldn't save ourselves

“Doubt thou the stars are fire; Doubt that the sun doth move; Doubt truth to be a liar; But never doubt I love.” -William Shakespeare

Message to Readers

if only i could hold for a little longer~


Peer Review

The last little cluster tied it all nice together, that was cool.


I don't have any questions everything's as clear and clouded as needed.


Reviewer Comments

The piece is beautiful, thanks for sharing.