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I would say that this piece is about pain, loss, and loneliness. All these emotions combined in one to show how this man is a survivor, fighter, but sad.
Oooooo! So the writing style is fantastic! The entire idea of writing about something so sensitive is simply amazing.
Just the part about family.
You are a very talented writer! Never stop writing, and great job on this piece!