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Impulsive, closed-off, and intelligent.
Yes, I was confused with the part when you said, " When it was you moving his legs, speaking with his lips, they became yours," Mostly because you didn't really explain how when the angel 'took the vessel' , it actually 'became' it. I thought the vessel was simply a translator. Later I understood, but I think if you expanded on 'took him as your vessel' and explained how the angel took the vessel as a host body; then the monologue would be so much better.
A little difficult to understand at times, but otherwise it was great! It was very expressive, engaging and captivating! I love how you were able to write the man perfectly! I think the man's phrases: "I-I, uh, really need you," and "You know how bad I am at expressing how I feel, but please don't leave,"; expressed his humanity and hesitance to describe himself perfectly. Great job!