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The writer's ability to capture frames with words is amazing. The thing that I relate the most in this piece is the pain of the baby blue bird and her fate. The writer's idea for the prompt proves how creative his/her creativity.
Absolutely nothing. This piece is already well explained.
You've written such beautifully and narrative style is so engaging. I loved reading it. Keepwriting! <3