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Hola any and all feeback is welcome. Happy December!
I especially ked the fact you talked about this, because its something people who aren't born in December would knw. I personally didn't know of this (summer baby), so I had no idea of this. Because of this, I can now be a little more conscious of my December friends
I got the feeling that despite being soo annoyed with all this, which is relatable, you are kind of getting sick if this routine . Just tired of having to constantly tell your siblings inly 2 more weeks, or yell at the radio. I get it.
I think all was good.
I think i was a good ending, because it was something readers wouldn't expect. after all the things you said, I did not expect that ending. It was a surprise, so great job on that.
This was great because it came from the heart, its what you wanted people to know and what you wanted to get off your chest, so thumbs up or achieving that.
Happy early birthday. <3<3<3