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The intro let me in and kindly showed me out with lots of questions left
Is the overcoat her's? Where is her bag.
I don't think Caspian tried to drown her. I think he actually saved her life, that someone sent him to. He doesn't sound angelic but demons don't tend to ressurect sad people.