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This holds such an important story. Because it is a reality. It's extremely emotionally powerful.
You carry the reader through a story of life and how childhood trauma changes you ad affects you growing up. The picture you paint is crystal clear. Honestly I really like the piece as is, but if you wanted to do something, maybe add to how people have different stories, with happy endings, but this isn't one. That could be added after the: "high and numb" stanza, but it really doesn't even need to be added.
Are there any lines/stanza's you're unsure about?Overall I love this piece.