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You nailed this competition! You incorporated storytelling and description, and extracted a great lesson from these events.
Well, it isn't just one thing... You understand that December is different for everyone, and you've experienced a few of those yourself.
Like I said, you nailed this!! I don't see anything else you might want to add in.
The ending links back to the beginning of the story in multiple ways, so you really do feel satisfied after you're done reading.
I love this piece and can't wait to see more from you!!