Letting my heart bleed on paper.

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Metal Heart

June 8, 2016

PROMPT: Open Prompt

Dear little heart
Hidden under steel
Too scared to feel
Hoping none draw near

Hard little heart
Love barely a slice
Cold as ice
Not one bit nice

Sad little heart
Barely living
People leaving
But still beating

There little heart
Can't cry now
Pain will grow
If you let them down
Shout out to Suri Purefoy for helping me with a line I couldn't remedy. The suggestion that you gave me really helped me and I love how the poem looks now!


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