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Check out this beautiful poem!
Your emotion that you put into this wonderful piece, connecting the reader even more.
I think it's great! The third line in the first stanza(
"...Hoping people don't draw near...") could use a tad bit of editing, but I love it either way!
Hi there, Jolenify! I just want to say thank you for writing, and publishing, this beautiful piece of artwork. Keep sharing your talent! You're amazing!