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The title, 'Ocean eyes', is very luring an beautiful, it reminded me of the Billie Eillish song I've never bothered to listen to XD
Just out of curiousity, are your eyes actually blue? Have you been to a beach that looks exactly like the one you described.
This is the most realistic beach description I've ever read, most are shining waters and white sand.