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I was delighted to know this was the be comings of a novel. I'm writing my own, as most know. It makes me wonder what type of novels people like reading.
I'd like to know more of the 'I' in the story. It mostly talks about Meg. There is a bit of room for improvement in the dialogue.
Otherwise, you have wonderful penmanship. Keep writing! Can't wait to read more! <3