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The line,'No matter how many times you stitch ...let it tear' stands out the most to me.It actually emphasizes on the the true ambience of the world,rather than the the things which are all dissolved in a delusion.
After finishing this piece, I am completely amazed as you try to put forward a true picture of the world to your lil' girl (if you'd have one)
This piece of poetry is so influential as well as true. My simple question to you is that has it come from the experiences you've gone through or some person?