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Cephus

By: Autumn.B.Coleman


FREE WRITING


Forgetting pain is convenient. Remembering it, agonizing. But remembering the truth is worth the suffering.
-Cheshire Cat, Alice in Wonderland

It is in the vague moments before sleep that I find the time to whisper to myself "insanity, insanity", and helplessly ponder what it is. 


Peer Review

The quote was a nice addition. it shocked me the cat said something profound


Can you please tell me what Cephus means, I've heard it before and I'd like to know how it ties in with the piece.


Reviewer Comments

Nice piece, simple and right to the point.