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Message to Readers
think about what i mean. guy's, girl's no offense.
The overall message of the piece, of treating girls right and they should treat you right, right back.
Where you said, "You don't have to buy ice for her.", did you mean ice cream or ice like jewlery or like a snow cone? Or a cup of physical ice?
This would make a good song, gives me Fall Out Boy/ Frank Iero and the Future Violents vibes.