Aurelia.Valus

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Most of my stories are based off of my dreams (weird right?)

School, sports, and work keep me busy so I don’t post a ton :(

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The Pool of Luminous Horizons

November 18, 2019

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Step after step
Into the pool of luminous horizons
Further Down she goes
Until the iridescent vista,
disappears before her
The water fills her eyes
Reflecting the paintings in the sky,
Daunting vermillion shines
With careless scarlet stains of her crimes
They scar the worlds flawless canvas,
As the heavens bow down once more
To ethereal darkness.
 
Me: I’m bored
Friend: write something 
Me: I can’t find the inspiration 
Friend: here, write something to this *sends a picture of a sunset*
Me: Right this second?
Friend: Yes
Me: ...

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2 Comments
  • Aurelia.Valus

    @Tushar Mandhan Lol I’m glad you were able to paint an image


    almost 2 years ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    That's what I call a pen portrait, meaning a portrait made with words.


    almost 2 years ago