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Wow!! I love the description of the fires and the emotions and feelings that pour out into the story! Really great piece left me clinging to each word
She's experienced trauma and guilt through her knowing what had happened
What caused the fire?
To help set the mood and make the reader realise something bad was about to happen set the weather e.g 'the storms were rumbling'
I really really enjoyed this piece of writing and I hope to see more from you! The rating definitely flew off the charts in my opinion!