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Message to Readers
Here's a poem about death.
Any feedback you have is great (and necessary)!
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the part where it says " Before all men enter His gates" what did you mean by that?
what would he do, would he feed us to his death hound? are you going to deepen this story more?
over all very good piece. great work!