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I haven't published a poem in a while, so this piece is a little overdue.
I'll try to post more poems from now on!
Any feedback you have on this piece is great!
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It's intriguing. Death described here is rather unlike he is portrayed sometimes elsewhere - rather than vehement, he seems simply objective. The poem feels like a statement of fact.
I'd be interested in seeing you expand upon the idea of Death's Humble Inn - it isn't elaborated much on here.
Definitely a piece I would be interested in seeing more of. Thanks for sharing ;)