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The title drew me in and the intro kept me reading, especially when I was called a small t-rex XD
The dynamic as myself being a 5'10 dinosaur and you being my caring zookeeper who wanted to marry me but didn't because it was best for me to marry my own kind is incredible and I felt things reading this, I was touched and confused and sad, it was a rollercoaster, I tell you.
There's nothing I feel needs to be added, it's amazingly and appropriately confusing.
I assume it takes place in current time with just strange goings on?
This is incredible, I've never read anything like it, it's so clever and strange and perfect really. Please keep writing, I've never seen anything this out there and awesome!
What I've taken from this is a piece about commitment, how no matter what you will love this person even if they were a 5'10 musically talented dinosaur, that their love will change you into the impossible.