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So, anybody who has played Fire Emblem: Three Houses may notice some similarities but this work isn’t like,,,, *that* character. You know, your one. Three Houses is just a fantastically pretty game which became my favourite incessantly quickly so now I’m being a tad bit inspired by it, okey-dokey. I’m sorry if this is jerky, it feels like it is, but I tried to fix it up as best I could. Also, the version change because I didn’t like the last title.
So, the writing is beautiful. Like genuinely, a very visually appealing and moving piece.
I kinda, didn't understand anything that was happening in this piece? That, of course, didn't matter, I got all the emotional beats, if that's what you were going for. However, the monastery, green hair, the sister, those didn't really carry through, and I imagine it's purposeful but the reader does not know why. Just some thoughts.
Thank you for this piece and good luck with the writing!