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Round three of okapi's competition! Hope you guys enjoy!
I absolutely loved the description in this! It was very mystical. It was like I was there with the nymph!
I would love to know more about where the nymph came from, or why they're "my nymph", but I feel that would be more suited to a prose piece.
I honestly couldn't put many comments on this because I think it's just so perfect. Fantasy descriptions are my favorite, so I may be a bit biased, but I really loved this. You're a very talented writer!